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For Creation of smaller states question how many of you have skimmed through Click .. So friends who had written about the mentioned question , kindly read the article and re-write the answers .. You will do it better >-
I have overshot word limit by around 40 words.Kindly give your valuable feedback . :-)
no doubt nice flow of answer but 1. you should also included 49-O form as, absence of secrecy while using 49-O was the main driving force behind the SC judgement 2. You simply put the figure of last election rather than analyzing them 3. you should also mentioned about compulsory voting and little about other facts affects voting turnout. these are my view but i am not very experienced guy so don't know is it correct to include or not what i said.
I am not an experienced player but here is my review : 1).Introduction was good but could be a little more concise. 2).Advantages discussed by you have focussed on SC 's rationale behind the directive a little too much so it has taken up a lot of wordspace.Instead you could have given other things which are important about NOTA like Increased electoral turnout,Decriminalisation etc. 3).I liked your point wrt to anonymity of voter being compromised earlier if he made a invalid vote. 4).Impact has been covered nicely by you . 5).Again the conclusion could have been little short and succinct. 6).Your conclusion and intro part has increased the length of your answer manifold. 7).I think in case of a 200 word answer to avoid missing on any point ;a pointwise approach would be more helpful. 8).Total words in your answer are 348 which is quite an.overshoot dont you think.
All in all a good answer although if you can compress your intro and conclusion a bit ,it can be the best one.
I have overshot word limit by around 40 words.Kindly give your valuable feedback . :-)
no doubt nice flow of answer but 1. you should also included 49-O form as, absence of secrecy while using 49-O was the main driving force behind the SC judgement 2. You simply put the figure of last election rather than analyzing them 3. you should also mentioned about compulsory voting and little about other facts affects voting turnout. these are my view but i am not very experienced guy so don't know is it correct to include or not what i said.
Thanks for your review buddy. Ya i also saw that i missed out on the secrecy part as mentioned by you.
Regarding analysis of statistics i have given my views but if i missed something i will surely improve upon .
nishaan-e-haider lagake ghum rhe LUV bhai ne mera suggestion accept kr lia hai so todays question is ""Discuss the importance and impact of NOTA option introduced recently by the Election Commission of India "(200 Words)
this is first time ever i wrote an answer, so for bear this shitty answer. please review my answer. no of words 152. TIA
Here is my review of your answer buddy . 1).I liked your intro but dont make it too simple either . 2).Under Importance of NOTA you have mentioned increased electoral particicpation but in a crude manner .Also you confused importance and impact.Impact is what effect NOTA had so far if any and points like secrecy and anonymity being maintained should be mentioned under importance of NOTA. 3).Though you have mentioned impact of NOTA too but explained it in a fuzzy way .It is not clearly reflected from your answer . 4).One or two line conclusion should also be added .
Lastly ,If you improve your writing skills wrt good words and proper language i am sure you can do much better .You have the potential so just keep on practicing . :-)
Nice answer buddy.Only things that you can improve upon as per me are , 1).You missed out on the decriminalisation part . 2).Under impact you have not mentioned that in place of a cleaner alternative like in delhi NOTA holds little significance. 3).Conclusion can be a little more succinct. 4).Language of the answer lacks in grammatical accuracy and coherence.It will improve with practice thats why i mentioned it in last.
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Comments
1. you should also included 49-O form as, absence of secrecy while using 49-O was the main driving force behind the SC judgement
2. You simply put the figure of last election rather than analyzing them
3. you should also mentioned about compulsory voting and little about other facts affects voting turnout.
these are my view but i am not very experienced guy so don't know is it correct to include or not what i said.
I am not an experienced player but here is my review :
1).Introduction was good but could be a little more concise.
2).Advantages discussed by you have focussed on SC 's rationale behind the directive a little too much so it has taken up a lot of wordspace.Instead you could have given other things which are important about NOTA like Increased electoral turnout,Decriminalisation etc.
3).I liked your point wrt to anonymity of voter being compromised earlier if he made a invalid vote.
4).Impact has been covered nicely by you .
5).Again the conclusion could have been little short and succinct.
6).Your conclusion and intro part has increased the length of your answer manifold.
7).I think in case of a 200 word answer to avoid missing on any point ;a pointwise approach would be more helpful.
8).Total words in your answer are 348 which is quite an.overshoot dont you think.
All in all a good answer although if you can compress your intro and conclusion a bit ,it can be the best one.
Ya i also saw that i missed out on the secrecy part as mentioned by you.
Regarding analysis of statistics i have given my views but if i missed something i will surely improve upon .
Here is my review of your answer buddy .
1).I liked your intro but dont make it too simple either .
2).Under Importance of NOTA you have mentioned increased electoral particicpation but in a crude manner .Also you confused importance and impact.Impact is what effect NOTA had so far if any and points like secrecy and anonymity being maintained should be mentioned under importance of NOTA.
3).Though you have mentioned impact of NOTA too but explained it in a fuzzy way .It is not clearly reflected from your answer .
4).One or two line conclusion should also be added .
Lastly ,If you improve your writing skills wrt good words and proper language i am sure you can do much better .You have the potential so just keep on practicing .
:-)
Nice answer buddy.Only things that you can improve upon as per me are ,
1).You missed out on the decriminalisation part .
2).Under impact you have not mentioned that in place of a cleaner alternative like in delhi NOTA holds little significance.
3).Conclusion can be a little more succinct.
4).Language of the answer lacks in grammatical accuracy and coherence.It will improve with practice thats why i mentioned it in last.