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[Peer Review] - General Studies | Answer Writing Practice | Mains 2014 |

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  • ok bhai as u wish
  • As no one is giving any question I will give another question from 2013 mains GS III paper

    Q. What do you understand by umpire decision review system in cricket? Discuss its various components. Explain how a silicone tape on the edge of a bat can fool the system. 200 words

    please review my answer and criticism is most welcome.TIA.
  • My answer for todays question on urbanisation..please give ur precious reviews :)
  • @Hegde

    My opinions on your answer
    1. You have used up too much space for intro and the T symbol thing is not needed.
    2. You should have taken more space for talking about the technology as the question is about science and technology and not the sporting part.
    3. You confused between silicone and silicon. Silicone is a polymer formed by infusion of silicon dioxide (silica) in organic compounds where as silicon is a metalloid element.
    4. There are no grammatical or language errors But you can improve the language used with more practice.
  • gud .carry on
  • @Hegde

    My opinions on your answer
    1. You have used up too much space for intro and the T symbol thing is not needed.
    2. You should have taken more space for talking about the technology as the question is about science and technology and not the sporting part.
    3. You confused between silicone and silicon. Silicone is a polymer formed by infusion of silicon dioxide (silica) in organic compounds where as silicon is a metalloid element.
    4. There are no grammatical or language errors But you can improve the language used with more practice.
    thank you for pointing out the difference of meaning the mis-spelled "silicon" instead of "silicone" made. appreciate it.
  • please bhaio mera aj kaa nswer dekh do koi
  • please bhaio mera aj kaa nswer dekh do koi
    vats main pehle apna answer post kr dun .fir tumhara dekhunga .
  • Here is my answer for urbanization question of today .
    Your precious reviews are awaited .
  • edited January 2014
    please bhaio mera aj kaa nswer dekh do koi
    @RAJANAKIN

    Here is my review buddy

    1).Intro is concise this time .Good job .
    2).Though i couldnt concur with your point of urbanization leading to emancipation .Urbanization at most can provide them with better oppurrunities but is not synonymous with their liberation which highly depends on the mindset that the society harbours imo .
    3).You have missed on the impact of urbanization on standard of living and its consequential effect in lowering of poverty.
    4).Side effects mentioned by you are good.
    5).Word limit again has been overshot due to excess space that side-effects have used up .Try to shorten and concise them.
    6).Conclusion is nice and concise.

    :-)
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