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edited December 2014 in Essay
Hey Guys! I'm doing MBA along with CSE preparation. I got to submit 2 essays for Stanford Essay contest . I urge you to please take your to review this
Just 200 Words: nothing long.

ESSAY1 - What maters you the most?

We live life like as if it’s a race. One is constantly on the go: wake up in the morning; go to work or to college; return to home and do what we are one is expected to do; tuck oneslf in at the night and get ready for the other next day. We are constantly blindsided by the technology – texts, phone calls, and emails. But many most people don’t take even a moments to stop and enjoy the smaller things in life and to reflect upon one’s past and their daily activities.
To me these moments of reflection, these moments of and introspection are the most important. The moment I witness the smile on the face of my sister when i bake cookies for her, the moments I take to repose after a long day and the moments of my recreation, all matter a lot to me. These are all moments that I need to survive, so I am aware that I’m not a robot going through the motions.
“Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take but by the moments that take our breath away.” — Hilary Cooper
It's true. The purpose of the life is defined by the moments that make us laugh, that inspire us, give us that feeling of inner achievement, worth, and placidity.



All your suggestions are most welcome- It means lot to me.

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