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  • raksha said:

    Hey @stable_graphene, @Ferrero_rocher ,@che, @psychopath, @doctor_zero @mr.green, @chachachaudhary n all ..can ve pick questions from marathon and write here on daily basis. .

    Sure :)
    •~dangal dangal~•
    If those who think to achieve,
    Have a firm and focused mind,
    They will realize what they thought of,
    And even as they have thought of.
    Thirukkural
  • Thats cooool..So lets start @che pic questions from marathon...or anyoneelse would pic and post ..on the daily basis and as per our convenience we can write . :)
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    Have written for ethics question perseverance and all..not able to put eg..plz help in writing good eg in relation to 'perseverance, equanimity and utilitarianism
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  • raksha said:

    Nuclear triad vala answer......

    Ye answer kuch jyda hi chota nai ho gaya ferrero :p waise @doctor_zero mentioned. .clearly tell what is nuclear triad .phir kaise significant hai phir problem kya hai system me ..than write conclusion. .
    :# han ....chota to hai ye answer...
    :D
  • What is open sky offer? Why do you think nepal rejected India's offer?
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  • Ab ye forum k comment ko bhi body chahiye. :/ .. cyber security vala answer... please review...
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  • raksha said:

    Have written for ethics question perseverance and all..not able to put eg..plz help in writing good eg in relation to 'perseverance, equanimity and utilitarianism

    Vaise to decent answer.. lekin kamiyan nikalni hi hain so-

    - intro itna bada zaruri nhi tha...(ethics k max ques mein values hi honge..sabme ek hi para chipkane ka man krega :p copy paste type )
    - equanimity k example mein you can write k chennai floods k time agar administrators equanimity nhi maintain krte to they wouldn't have been able to handle the situation..similary earthquake etc vala bhi ho skta hai...


    What is the buddhist term that you have mentioned for it??
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  • What is open sky offer? Why do you think nepal rejected India's offer?

    Good points but poor phrasing. In mains, writing this long sentences will become difficult without sacrificing content. Like the 3rd point written as already India-nepal connection present can be rephrase as existing lines b/w india-nepal. This will give answer a mains outlook, professional kind of view.
    No pragmatic conclusion, everyone know with time things will get sort, question is how is this possible. We have to relate it with other factors like abandoning big brother approach, China factor etc.

    Rest quality is fine.
    GRAPHENE v 2.0....
  • Ab ye forum k comment ko bhi body chahiye. :/ .. cyber security vala answer... please review...

    bhai maybe i'm wrong but the origin of the qn lies in why cs? so you may start by mentioning hacking of ukrainian power grid, 13 m debit cards being hacked, bangladesh bank wala incident and most common occuring incidents of keypad jamming. then you can proceed with the measures that can be taken to prevent it.
    Currently reading : No Place to Hide by Glenn Greenwald
    Last read : Unstoppable by Maria Sharapova
  • What is open sky offer? Why do you think nepal rejected India's offer?

    Good points but poor phrasing. In mains, writing this long sentences will become difficult without sacrificing content. Like the 3rd point written as already India-nepal connection present can be rephrase as existing lines b/w india-nepal. This will give answer a mains outlook, professional kind of view.
    No pragmatic conclusion, everyone know with time things will get sort, question is how is this possible. We have to relate it with other factors like abandoning big brother approach, China factor etc.

    Rest quality is fine.
    Hmm... dhanyavad... vo phrasing thing to sach mein i didn't care... thanks for pointing out... please keep reviewing :)
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  • Ab ye forum k comment ko bhi body chahiye. :/ .. cyber security vala answer... please review...

    bhai maybe i'm wrong but the origin of the qn lies in why cs? so you may start by mentioning hacking of ukrainian power grid, 13 m debit cards being hacked, bangladesh bank wala incident and most common occuring incidents of keypad jamming. then you can proceed with the measures that can be taken to prevent it.
    Examples to sahi hain... thanks...it will reflect the urgent requirement of security framework...
    But do we really need to mention the measures to prevent it?

    And thanks for the review.. please keep reviewing :)
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  • What is open sky offer? Why do you think nepal rejected India's offer?

    Overall thik hai but thoda coherent nai hai answer ..as @stable_graphene mentioned u could have written points in shortest possible way ..itana lamba likhne ki awashykta nai..rest is fine:) keep writing.
  • raksha said:

    Have written for ethics question perseverance and all..not able to put eg..plz help in writing good eg in relation to 'perseverance, equanimity and utilitarianism

    Vaise to decent answer.. lekin kamiyan nikalni hi hain so-

    - intro itna bada zaruri nhi tha...(ethics k max ques mein values hi honge..sabme ek hi para chipkane ka man krega :p copy paste type )
    - equanimity k example mein you can write k chennai floods k time agar administrators equanimity nhi maintain krte to they wouldn't have been able to handle the situation..similary earthquake etc vala bhi ho skta hai...


    What is the buddhist term that you have mentioned for it??
    Haan wo likhne ke baad laga khmkha itna bada intro uthaya..u pointed well ..good eg u mentioned. .are wo term ka matalab hota hai look over and keep calm..art culture me pada tha yaad aaya th likh diya :)
  • 1.“Gross Enrollment ratio among tribal students in the primary school level has declined from 113.2 in 2013-14 to 109.4 in 2015-16.” Cite reasons for the same.
    2.Critically examine India’s ‘Digital India’ programme, and concerns raised against it.

    3“The worst form of inequality is to try to make unequal things equal.” Discuss Aristotle’s views.
  • Answer for aristotle. .i found this question a bit tricky..request @stable_graphene, @Ferrero_rocher, @che, @psychopath, @doctor_zero , @all to write the same ..
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  • raksha said:

    raksha said:

    Have written for ethics question perseverance and all..not able to put eg..plz help in writing good eg in relation to 'perseverance, equanimity and utilitarianism

    Vaise to decent answer.. lekin kamiyan nikalni hi hain so-

    - intro itna bada zaruri nhi tha...(ethics k max ques mein values hi honge..sabme ek hi para chipkane ka man krega :p copy paste type )
    - equanimity k example mein you can write k chennai floods k time agar administrators equanimity nhi maintain krte to they wouldn't have been able to handle the situation..similary earthquake etc vala bhi ho skta hai...


    What is the buddhist term that you have mentioned for it??
    Haan wo likhne ke baad laga khmkha itna bada intro uthaya..u pointed well ..good eg u mentioned. .are wo term ka matalab hota hai look over and keep calm..art culture me pada tha yaad aaya th likh diya :)
    Sahi hai yaar.... interlinking B)

    Vo term kya hai lekin... u se hai na kuch... vo term bta do please :neutral:
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  • raksha said:

    raksha said:

    Have written for ethics question perseverance and all..not able to put eg..plz help in writing good eg in relation to 'perseverance, equanimity and utilitarianism

    Vaise to decent answer.. lekin kamiyan nikalni hi hain so-

    - intro itna bada zaruri nhi tha...(ethics k max ques mein values hi honge..sabme ek hi para chipkane ka man krega :p copy paste type )
    - equanimity k example mein you can write k chennai floods k time agar administrators equanimity nhi maintain krte to they wouldn't have been able to handle the situation..similary earthquake etc vala bhi ho skta hai...


    What is the buddhist term that you have mentioned for it??
    Haan wo likhne ke baad laga khmkha itna bada intro uthaya..u pointed well ..good eg u mentioned. .are wo term ka matalab hota hai look over and keep calm..art culture me pada tha yaad aaya th likh diya :)
    Sahi hai yaar.... interlinking B)

    Vo term kya hai lekin... u se hai na kuch... vo term bta do please :neutral:
    Okay...got it... "upekkha" ...thank you :)
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  • edited December 2016
    raksha said:

    Answer for gross Enrollment ratio among tribal students. .

    fine answer,,but it didn't addressed the question.
    Question was why GER decreased in past 3 years, the problems which have been mentioned existed before 2013 also, right? But as we can see like the point of poverty, it has decreased in tribal areas na, so should it be included in problems?

    Rather problem part should focus on that we have made schools in tribal areas at many places, but what about its maintenance, availing teachers, improving connectivity to schools by roads and buses, improving teacher quality, reducing teacher absenteeism etc...

    introduction: felt unnecessarily large, other members may add any point I have mistaken here.
    GRAPHENE v 2.0....
  • @raksha @stable_graphene @Ferrero_rocher @psychopath @Che @all happyyy new year guys.. aap sabse next year milte hai ab.. see ya on 3rd jan. :) :) :)
    •~dangal dangal~•
    If those who think to achieve,
    Have a firm and focused mind,
    They will realize what they thought of,
    And even as they have thought of.
    Thirukkural
  • raksha said:

    raksha said:

    Have written for ethics question perseverance and all..not able to put eg..plz help in writing good eg in relation to 'perseverance, equanimity and utilitarianism

    Vaise to decent answer.. lekin kamiyan nikalni hi hain so-

    - intro itna bada zaruri nhi tha...(ethics k max ques mein values hi honge..sabme ek hi para chipkane ka man krega :p copy paste type )
    - equanimity k example mein you can write k chennai floods k time agar administrators equanimity nhi maintain krte to they wouldn't have been able to handle the situation..similary earthquake etc vala bhi ho skta hai...


    What is the buddhist term that you have mentioned for it??
    Haan wo likhne ke baad laga khmkha itna bada intro uthaya..u pointed well ..good eg u mentioned. .are wo term ka matalab hota hai look over and keep calm..art culture me pada tha yaad aaya th likh diya :)
    Sahi hai yaar.... interlinking B)

    Vo term kya hai lekin... u se hai na kuch... vo term bta do please :neutral:
    Okay...got it... "upekkha" ...thank you :)
    :)
  • raksha said:

    Answer for gross Enrollment ratio among tribal students. .

    fine answer,,but it didn't addressed the question.
    Question was why GER decreased in past 3 years, the problems which have been mentioned existed before 2013 also, right? But as we can see like the point of poverty, it has decreased in tribal areas na, so should it be included in problems?

    Rather problem part should focus on that we have made schools in tribal areas at many places, but what about its maintenance, availing teachers, improving connectivity to schools by roads and buses, improving teacher quality, reducing teacher absenteeism etc...

    introduction: felt unnecessarily large, other members may add any point I have mistaken here.
    Oh nice points graphene..i forgot connectivity wala point ..absentee issues ..@stable_graphene recent report of tribal ministry mentioned that poverty is still thr and is a reason for low litrecy ..but as u suggested i would look for it ..could u plz write this questions..i have seen others answer on marathon more or less its same like mine ..
  • @raksha @stable_graphene @Ferrero_rocher @psychopath @Che @all happyyy new year guys.. aap sabse next year milte hai ab.. see ya on 3rd jan. :) :) :)

    Kaha ghoomne ja rahe ho new year pe doctor @doctor_zero :p happy new year in advance:)
  • @raksha @stable_graphene @Ferrero_rocher @psychopath @Che @all happyyy new year guys.. aap sabse next year milte hai ab.. see ya on 3rd jan. :) :) :)

    lol,,,same to u "the physician"...enjoy the day... :)
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  • @raksha @stable_graphene @Ferrero_rocher @psychopath @Che @all happyyy new year guys.. aap sabse next year milte hai ab.. see ya on 3rd jan. :) :) :)

    lol,,,same to u "the physician"...enjoy the day... :)
    Happy new year @doctor_zero enjoy and have a promising year ahead :) :) :)
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  • GER vala answer... tribal population etc etc

    nice attempt!!
    Currently reading : No Place to Hide by Glenn Greenwald
    Last read : Unstoppable by Maria Sharapova
  • Aristotle vala answer..............................
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  • GER vala answer... tribal population etc etc

    nice attempt!!
    Thank you.. any add on?
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  • raksha said:

    Answer for aristotle. .i found this question a bit tricky..request @stable_graphene, @Ferrero_rocher, @che, @psychopath, @doctor_zero , @all to write the same ..

    @raksha and others please read my answer also. We have written completely different aspects, though i like yours!

    And when they say, there is no ideal answer, perhaps they are right.
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