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  • Essay2

    Solution part is not in the pic wrote sm 5 points in exam as solutions
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  • All your comments will b very helpful for improving and get more marks in future exams..
    Thanks for ur tym..
  • Agar es prakar ki handwriting likhi hai toh expected marks m se 10 marks kum kar lo in each paper. :mrgreen:
  • Brother..Your Answers are pleasant to read. All the best for results.i am able to learn a lot.Thank you so much for taking pain to write Are you also uploading GS paper 4 answers?
  • kaguya said:

    Agar es prakar ki handwriting likhi hai toh expected marks m se 10 marks kum kar lo in each paper. :mrgreen:

    aur aisa kanhi ka int aur kanhi ka pathar laga ke ans nahi likha jata.
    points bilkul relevant aur order me aane chahiye aisa nahi ki janha man kiya likh diye :mrgreen:
  • bedapar said:

    kaguya said:

    Agar es prakar ki handwriting likhi hai toh expected marks m se 10 marks kum kar lo in each paper. :mrgreen:

    aur aisa kanhi ka int aur kanhi ka pathar laga ke ans nahi likha jata.
    points bilkul relevant aur order me aane chahiye aisa nahi ki janha man kiya likh diye :mrgreen:
    +So much.
    Also flow bahut important hai. Points ugalne se acche marks nahi milenge. Back karna bhi hoga points ko with facts, example, reco, etc etc. Aur diagrams, flowcharts aur maps bahut jaruri hai :mrgreen:
  • edited January 24
    @kaguya Handwriting maintained in the paper
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  • mahapatro said:

    @kaguya Handwriting maintained in the paper

    saaf 2 likha hai toh handwriting utta issue nahi karega.
  • sunny2009 said:

    Brother..Your Answers are pleasant to read. All the best for results.i am able to learn a lot.Thank you so much for taking pain to write Are you also uploading GS paper 4 answers?

    Im not uploading gs4 as i hav given gs4 ka two mock tests.. Btw case studies were good except rehabilitation policy one.. Seven sins galat likha and weber not attempted.. Rest all are answered with examples in each qn..
    Thanks bhai
  • bedapar said:

    kaguya said:

    Agar es prakar ki handwriting likhi hai toh expected marks m se 10 marks kum kar lo in each paper. :mrgreen:

    aur aisa kanhi ka int aur kanhi ka pathar laga ke ans nahi likha jata.
    points bilkul relevant aur order me aane chahiye aisa nahi ki janha man kiya likh diye :mrgreen:
    Okay bhai next time definitely improve karunga
  • mahapatro said:

    @kaguya Handwriting maintained in the paper

    Sahi hai phir toh... Bus examiner ko kast nahi hona chaiye.. all mighty won't take any pain to figure what you have writtem. B)
  • kaguya said:

    mahapatro said:

    @kaguya Handwriting maintained in the paper

    Sahi hai phir toh... Bus examiner ko kast nahi hona chaiye.. all mighty won't take any pain to figure what you have writtem. B)
    haan bina nayan sukh ke number kam milte hain B)
  • This is my present hand situation so cant write paragraph now but thats how i wrote in d exam..
    Essay with even more good handwriting..

    This iphone sucks ya everytym i hav to compress n upload
    :'(
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  • Thank u once again brother. Did you write mains earlier also?
  • edited January 24
    Hume said:

    kaguya said:

    mahapatro said:

    @kaguya Handwriting maintained in the paper

    Sahi hai phir toh... Bus examiner ko kast nahi hona chaiye.. all mighty won't take any pain to figure what you have writtem. B)
    almighty ... sorry rok nahi paya behan/bhai :mrgreen:
    Hahhaha.. :mrgreen:
    Thank you soooooo much. You are better than grammarly. :mrgreen:
  • sunny2009 said:

    Thank u once again brother. Did you write mains earlier also?

    No bhai first mains with 50-60 days prep for geography optional

    15-20 days for gs paper after prelims
  • bedapar said:

    kaguya said:

    Agar es prakar ki handwriting likhi hai toh expected marks m se 10 marks kum kar lo in each paper. :mrgreen:

    aur aisa kanhi ka int aur kanhi ka pathar laga ke ans nahi likha jata.
    points bilkul relevant aur order me aane chahiye aisa nahi ki janha man kiya likh diye :mrgreen:
    @bedapar bhai Aap ko kya lagta kitte marks mil sakte hai.. Aur kya change karna hai ache marks paane ke liye..
  • mahapatro said:

    bedapar said:

    kaguya said:

    Agar es prakar ki handwriting likhi hai toh expected marks m se 10 marks kum kar lo in each paper. :mrgreen:

    aur aisa kanhi ka int aur kanhi ka pathar laga ke ans nahi likha jata.
    points bilkul relevant aur order me aane chahiye aisa nahi ki janha man kiya likh diye :mrgreen:
    @bedapar bhai Aap ko kya lagta kitte marks mil sakte hai.. Aur kya change karna hai ache marks paane ke liye..
    marks ka toh bhagwan hi malik hai. no one can predict the marks.
    points thik se arrange hone chahiye aur unki backing ache se honi chahiye .
  • @kaguya Aap ko kya lagta kitte marks mil sakte hai.. Aur kya change karna hai ache marks paane ke liye..
  • bedapar said:

    mahapatro said:

    bedapar said:

    kaguya said:

    Agar es prakar ki handwriting likhi hai toh expected marks m se 10 marks kum kar lo in each paper. :mrgreen:

    aur aisa kanhi ka int aur kanhi ka pathar laga ke ans nahi likha jata.
    points bilkul relevant aur order me aane chahiye aisa nahi ki janha man kiya likh diye :mrgreen:
    @bedapar bhai Aap ko kya lagta kitte marks mil sakte hai.. Aur kya change karna hai ache marks paane ke liye..
    marks ka toh bhagwan hi malik hai. no one can predict the marks.
    points thik se arrange hone chahiye aur unki backing ache se honi chahiye .
    For example??
  • mahapatro said:

    bedapar said:

    mahapatro said:

    bedapar said:

    kaguya said:

    Agar es prakar ki handwriting likhi hai toh expected marks m se 10 marks kum kar lo in each paper. :mrgreen:

    aur aisa kanhi ka int aur kanhi ka pathar laga ke ans nahi likha jata.
    points bilkul relevant aur order me aane chahiye aisa nahi ki janha man kiya likh diye :mrgreen:
    @bedapar bhai Aap ko kya lagta kitte marks mil sakte hai.. Aur kya change karna hai ache marks paane ke liye..
    marks ka toh bhagwan hi malik hai. no one can predict the marks.
    points thik se arrange hone chahiye aur unki backing ache se honi chahiye .
    For example??
    like SCS ans write strategic issues, geographical issues together aisa nahi ki 1 point idhar ka aur 1 udhar ka.
    same issues hain max ans me gandhi subhash- it should be chronological .
  • mahapatro said:

    @kaguya Aap ko kya lagta kitte marks mil sakte hai.. Aur kya change karna hai ache marks paane ke liye..

    Bhai same jo bedapar ne kaha. :/
  • Nobody is reviewing ya.. All r so busy it seems
  • @Ramaswamy plz review my answers
  • gs paper 2, u have written well. it seems ur from pubad. anyways special mentions about question on party systems, i think i wrongly interpreted...i wrote about multiparty, charisma and leader more important than party... name sake answer... and with respect to child policy also u have written good i wish..my answer was way tooo away from it... i talked about two child policy and shamed of it as well... you have done well be ready for score of 95

    personally i feel ... i have not done justice in my paper ...
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