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  • MissEyre said:

    4,3

    What was the structure of your education essay?
    The Wound is the place where the Light enters you.
  • Educatn is itself a value intrinsic concept

    Not necessarily, education is value neutral IMHO.
    I started with this line only.....
  • ramjet said:

    ramjet said:

    waise aaj mera personal best record tha,... english compulsory 1 ghantta 2 minute mein khatam....with precies

    easy tha kaafi. 2-3 grammar mein doubt huye otherwise precise was also very easy. ekbaar hi padhna padha
    haan...aur meri speed bhi farrate daar thi...thoda usska bhi credit do :angry:
    bhai bade bhai. 1.15 ghanta lagaye the hum. na aage na peeche pel diye jo mann mein aaya. ek launde ka paper choot gaya the english ka meri class mein :D . aapki speed mast hain.. pass hi toh hona hian
    It is Job Hi Karwalo .. not Jo Bhi Karwalo.... mind it
  • @Captain_Peroxide Yar maine attendance sheet pe medium nahi dala essay paper ka.... koi problem to nahi hogi na ?
  • chalo all the best sabko kal k liye.. bye
    It is Job Hi Karwalo .. not Jo Bhi Karwalo.... mind it
  • Topic to mene bhi mentioned nahi kiya .....kya hoga..?any ideas...please share kare..
  • Fuhrer said:

    Essay paper

    Bhai, essay ka paper tha kya socio ka?

    The way you quoted theoriests makes me uneasy for my socio paper. :s
    CSE 2015. Got in.

    CSE 2016. Hopefully, the hallowed All India Services.
  • kisi room mein koi bumm ladki thi kya??
    जननी जन्मभूमिश्च स्वर्गादपि गरीयसी
  • sabfixhai said:

    @sabfixhai room number? :P


    40 ... Lal alto leke ataa hu andar park karta hu... Badi shaitani karta hu
    Milte hain kal... Lol
    Maine saari duniya Ko sudhaarne ka theka le rakha hai, so don't mind if I mind your business instead of my own.
  • Ye kya bakar paper aaya taha
  • kisi ne "Technology replce manpower " waala kiya ... maine to last mein conclude kiya ki technology like nuclear weapon man power to kya poora planet saaf kar degi ... sabka soopra saaf
  • sabfixhai said:

    @sabfixhai room number? :P


    40 ... Lal alto leke ataa hu andar park karta hu... Badi shaitani karta hu
    Milte hain kal... Lol
    kaha hai tum dono ka center?
    जननी जन्मभूमिश्च स्वर्गादपि गरीयसी
  • ramjet said:

    kisi room mein koi bumm ladki thi kya??


    sab launde the topa aur muffler laga ke khunnas bhari aankho se dekh rahe the ek doosre ko

  • sabfixhai said:

    ramjet said:

    kisi room mein koi bumm ladki thi kya??

    sab launde the topa aur muffler laga ke khunnas bhari aankho se dekh rahe the ek doosre ko
    haan bhai...mere yaha toh do teen gloves pehen ke bhi de rahe the...ajab ajab namoone hai...ek toh pehle paani peeta...fir toilet jaata....fir paani fir toilet....BC mann kiya boldu ki bottle aur paper leke toilet mein kyu nahi baith jaata bhai :\
    जननी जन्मभूमिश्च स्वर्गादपि गरीयसी
  • sabfixhai said:

    ramjet said:

    kisi room mein koi bumm ladki thi kya??


    sab launde the topa aur muffler laga ke khunnas bhari aankho se dekh rahe the ek doosre ko

    mumbai sahi se. mast bermude mein sab aaye the. dusre paper mein garmi bhi lagna chaalu
    It is Job Hi Karwalo .. not Jo Bhi Karwalo.... mind it
  • sabfixhai said:

    ramjet said:

    kisi room mein koi bumm ladki thi kya??


    sab launde the topa aur muffler laga ke khunnas bhari aankho se dekh rahe the ek doosre ko

    mumbai sahi se. mast bermude mein sab aaye the. dusre paper mein garmi bhi lagna chaalu
    bumm ladki koi??
    जननी जन्मभूमिश्च स्वर्गादपि गरीयसी
  • ok last sawal.... postpone hone ke chance hai kya? :D :D
    जननी जन्मभूमिश्च स्वर्गादपि गरीयसी
  • IMO It's social science and humanities education which has value education embedded in it........I don't see how teaching only maths and sciences can lead to any kind of understanding of values, unless of course you are teaching about the ethics of sciences but which will again come under social sciences.

    Science,inter alia, was the leitmotif of the period of renaissance.And if you read more on this, you'd appreciate the fact that science teaches objectivity,a mainstay of ethics.
  • ramjet said:

    sabfixhai said:

    @sabfixhai room number? :P


    40 ... Lal alto leke ataa hu andar park karta hu... Badi shaitani karta hu
    Milte hain kal... Lol
    kaha hai tum dono ka center?
    Abhay Pareek, Jaipur... Tum Yojna Bhavan baith kar maje karo.. Lol
    Maine saari duniya Ko sudhaarne ka theka le rakha hai, so don't mind if I mind your business instead of my own.
  • ramjet said:

    sabfixhai said:

    ramjet said:

    kisi room mein koi bumm ladki thi kya??


    sab launde the topa aur muffler laga ke khunnas bhari aankho se dekh rahe the ek doosre ko

    mumbai sahi se. mast bermude mein sab aaye the. dusre paper mein garmi bhi lagna chaalu
    bumm ladki koi??
    bhai 3 thi. par mc ne mujhe pehli row mein baitha diya .english k paper mein palatna pad raha tha
    It is Job Hi Karwalo .. not Jo Bhi Karwalo.... mind it
  • sabfixhai said:

    @sabfixhai room number? :P


    40 ... Lal alto leke ataa hu andar park karta hu... Badi shaitani karta hu
    Milte hain kal... Lol
    me soch raha tha chillaau paan kaha hai be... fir socha forumias nahi hai kikuch bhi chilla do :D

  • ramjet said:

    ok last sawal.... postpone hone ke chance hai kya? :D :D

    Very high chances dude, very high.. Lol
    Maine saari duniya Ko sudhaarne ka theka le rakha hai, so don't mind if I mind your business instead of my own.
  • edited December 2015

    ramjet said:

    sabfixhai said:

    ramjet said:

    kisi room mein koi bumm ladki thi kya??


    sab launde the topa aur muffler laga ke khunnas bhari aankho se dekh rahe the ek doosre ko

    mumbai sahi se. mast bermude mein sab aaye the. dusre paper mein garmi bhi lagna chaalu
    bumm ladki koi??
    bhai 3 thi. par mc ne mujhe pehli row mein baitha diya .english k paper mein palatna pad raha tha
    aree toh break mein cozy hona tha na bhai... poochna tha kaisa gaya paper....kaunsa essay likhi...wagehra wahegra....fir poochte ...chaupaati claogi exam ke baad?? (i know only caupati..so that's why)
    जननी जन्मभूमिश्च स्वर्गादपि गरीयसी
  • Nuralain said:

    @Bandit lots of examples - ratan manjri se start kia history mahabharat Gandhi trudeau hitler narayan murthy tarun tejpal police leadership by example , leadership qualities, collective social responsibility guided by leaders bla bla

    Similar kara maine bhi... Hope misinterpretation nahi tha
  • ramjet said:

    ramjet said:

    sabfixhai said:

    ramjet said:

    kisi room mein koi bumm ladki thi kya??


    sab launde the topa aur muffler laga ke khunnas bhari aankho se dekh rahe the ek doosre ko

    mumbai sahi se. mast bermude mein sab aaye the. dusre paper mein garmi bhi lagna chaalu
    bumm ladki koi??
    bhai 3 thi. par mc ne mujhe pehli row mein baitha diya .english k paper mein palatna pad raha tha
    aree toh break mein cozy hona tha na bhai... poochna tha kaisa gaya paper....kaunsa essay likhi...wagehra wahegra....fir poochte ...chaupaati claogi exam ke baad?? (i know only caupati..so that's why)
    exam mein appan risk nahi lete. kis khopche se kiske mai baap aa jaye.. apna bhi ghar 1-2 km hi dur the.... saala cig nahi pee paaye hum.. laundiyabaaji kaha se karte
    It is Job Hi Karwalo .. not Jo Bhi Karwalo.... mind it
  • What was the framework of education value essay, any enlightened soul?
  • chalo baba log...apun chalta....power nap lene...fir uthh ke padhna hai history +polity+eco survey+world history+quantum mechanics(socha itna fek raha hu....toh limit he paar kar deta hu)
    जननी जन्मभूमिश्च स्वर्गादपि गरीयसी
  • edited December 2015
    yawn said:

    Character of the institution is reflected in its leader.

    Ye wala kaafi khatarnak topic hai. Pehla reading pe lagta hai.. ki leader ke character ke tarah institution hona chahiye..sala dobara pade toh topic alag hi hai.. yaha pe how does an institution mould its leader ke baare mei poocha hai.. tumhara kya opinion hai?

    #newbie

    Intro:
    The History of civilization has been but the history of individuals. We remember the reign of Ashoka, the conquests of Alexander, the evil of Hitler and the virtues of Mahatma Gandhi and Martin Luther King. Each of these individuals were leaders in their institutions, political or social, and they defined it. This has been the challenge of civilization, how to make virtuous leaders, whereas at the same time, tame the cult of personality.

    Rest of essay.

    About macroinstitutions and leaders- political, social, economic, religion etc.
    Microinstituions- family, education etc.
    Highlisting the dichotomy of virtue and vice, and how leaders with these shape their institutions.


    Institutions shaping the leader and leader shaping the institution. e.g of institutions themselves shape leaders.

    Taming the cult of personality.
    Weber, charismatic authority and iron cage.

    Anecdotes etc. to substantiate point.

    Conclusion,
    Individuals are brought up in the web of institutions such of family, educational, social, and shape and are in turn shaped by each of them. The individuals rise to become leaders in such institutions. Thus, institutions and its leaders are shaped by the wider context of society. Substantiated this point.

    The history of civilization is not the history of individuals. It is a history of progress towards a moral and just society. In this context, both individuals and leaders form a part. The relationship is not linear, but dialectical. Leaders in of the various institutions of society posses tremendous power to ensure social solidarity and at the same time, form the fulcrum of social change towards a moral and just social order.
    CSE 2015. Got in.

    CSE 2016. Hopefully, the hallowed All India Services.
  • Precis to bada hi vahiyaad tha yar :D ...wrote 4,4...saare pages bhar diye bhai essay me wo bhi 2 ghante mein :p lets c kya hota hai...
    Atb fr tomorrow guys o:)
  • Somebody please upload India bhai's 100 topics and orient 40 + issues..
    2 attempts : 2 mains out
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