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Synergy Essay writing-FAKE EVALUATION !!!!! Beware.

Guys,
Has anyone written synergy tests(21st oct and 28th oct) for which they are charging Rs.500 per essay.
i wrote an essay there expecting honest evaluation and feedback but i am shocked to see the test copy after their evaluation.
prima facie it appears as the remarks given indicate that it was checked by somebody not having required english proficiency let alone having the required competency.The feedback mentions only shortcoming of handwriting and crosscutting as if i had written everything perfect.

What is happening .... ?? Are they playing with hard work of aspirants ?? Are u having similar experience ??
ओ राही ...ओ राही ....तू रौशनी का सिपाही ...!!
तू जो चलेगा....तो राह बनेगी...
ख्वाबों से तेरे ...ये दुनिया सजेगी...
ओ राही ...ओ राही....!
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  • edited October 2015
    i want to upload the image of the test copy,but unable to do it....pls suggest how to upload it.
    ओ राही ...ओ राही ....तू रौशनी का सिपाही ...!!
    तू जो चलेगा....तो राह बनेगी...
    ख्वाबों से तेरे ...ये दुनिया सजेगी...
    ओ राही ...ओ राही....!
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  • have a look.....what are they Tries to say........its evident !!!!!.
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    ओ राही ...ओ राही ....तू रौशनी का सिपाही ...!!
    तू जो चलेगा....तो राह बनेगी...
    ख्वाबों से तेरे ...ये दुनिया सजेगी...
    ओ राही ...ओ राही....!
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  • By the way your handwriting needs no improvement...
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  • Most coaching institutes hire "seniors" to check such tests instead of giving it to their overloaded faculty. I strongly suggest everyone not to waste your money on test series without knowing who checks them. Just share it with your friend and ask him to evaluate; I'm sure you'll get a few new points. Also, review it yourself after a week, I usually have something to add by then.
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  • Go easy on the chap. You have paid 500 bucks for practice. You can't expect a upsc level examiner correcting copies.
    Plus many people are weak in using tenses, verb forms correctly.
    You have also made some errors.

    Smile and grab the positives from his evaluation.
    it's not about the chap...it's about the institute...which is brazenly duping hardworking aspirants!!

    if they cant even check the copies they should evenly declare that it will be mere a writing practice.....so that one is not fooled by the fake evaluation.....
    also one would try another option avoiding falling in the trap.
    This is crazy when somebody not having basic grammatical knowledge checks your essay....!!
    A experienced senior checking it is another thing....but somebody may be perhaps doing it from its clerical staff who probably might not be 10th passed is shocking....!!

    Errors are bound to happen.......that's why people join these institutes to get honest feedback.....they surely do not deserve this crap......!!
    And 500 bucks matter a lot.....especially to aspirants coming from far remote areas of the country to this mecca of ias preparation to realize their dreams !
    ओ राही ...ओ राही ....तू रौशनी का सिपाही ...!!
    तू जो चलेगा....तो राह बनेगी...
    ख्वाबों से तेरे ...ये दुनिया सजेगी...
    ओ राही ...ओ राही....!
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  • Your handwriting is good. Don't listen to them.
    Shoddy feedback. Achha hua me nahi gya. :)
    IAS 2016 batch.
    "My watch has ended."
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  • Your handwriting is good. Don't listen to them.
    Shoddy feedback. Achha hua me nahi gya. :)
    have a look.....what are they Tries to say........its evident !!!!!.
    Your writing is good and regarding the checking by an inexperienced person,we have to accept this as almost all coaching institutes have inexperienced people only to do this.Better you check yourself and self analyse if some more points could have been added.
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  • dogdog
    edited October 2015
    Handwriting is awesome bro. The things to be checked in essay are -

    (a) Purposeful introduction ( should be interesting and tell what you are going to write in essay further)

    (b) Structured body, relevance to the topic, flow of language

    (c) Multidimensional thinking, involve all stakeholders, do PESTAL analysis, be critical - don't write too much on one single aspect, try to provide solutions to the problems enumerated

    (d) Conclusion should be positive and futuristic. Hope should always be there no matter how much bad the conditions are.

    Writing essay is an art that needs to be developed. With few established tricks and procedures, your every essay will fetch very good marks. So, work on those aspects. Feedback like these Tries to fool you by telling you that your handwriting is bad. So, you don't Tries to take their advice and have faith in yourself.
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  • Handwriting is awesome bro. The things to be checked in essay are -

    (a) Purposeful introduction ( should be interesting and tell what you are going to write in essay further)

    (b) Structured body, relevance to the topic, flow of language

    (c) Multidimensional thinking, involve all stakeholders, do PESTAL analysis, be critical - don't write too much on one single aspect, try to provide solutions to the problems enumerated

    (d) Conclusion should be positive and futuristic. Hope should always be there no matter how much bad the conditions are.

    Writing essay is an art that needs to be developed. With few established tricks and procedures, your every essay will fetch very good marks. So, work on those aspects. Feedback like these Tries to fool you by telling you that your handwriting is bad. So, you don't Tries to take their advice and have faith in yourself.
    It's called PESTLE
    IAS 2016 batch.
    "My watch has ended."
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  • Handwriting is awesome bro. The things to be checked in essay are -

    (a) Purposeful introduction ( should be interesting and tell what you are going to write in essay further)

    (b) Structured body, relevance to the topic, flow of language

    (c) Multidimensional thinking, involve all stakeholders, do PESTAL analysis, be critical - don't write too much on one single aspect, try to provide solutions to the problems enumerated

    (d) Conclusion should be positive and futuristic. Hope should always be there no matter how much bad the conditions are.

    Writing essay is an art that needs to be developed. With few established tricks and procedures, your every essay will fetch very good marks. So, work on those aspects. Feedback like these Tries to fool you by telling you that your handwriting is bad. So, you don't Tries to take their advice and have faith in yourself.
    @dog
    nice suggestions dude...thanks
    by the way what is PESTAL analysis?

    कुछ किये बिना ही जय जय कार नहीं होती
    कोशिश करने वालों की हार नहीं होती
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  • ok, that is one shoddy "Checking"
    ... checking an English essay without any grasp over grammar [-X [-X [-X [-X [-X
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  • grammar is important......but holistic understanding to evaluate on multidimensional perspective is essential.
    ओ राही ...ओ राही ....तू रौशनी का सिपाही ...!!
    तू जो चलेगा....तो राह बनेगी...
    ख्वाबों से तेरे ...ये दुनिया सजेगी...
    ओ राही ...ओ राही....!
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  • paying 500 for one essay tells a lot about u .
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  • Handwriting is awesome bro. The things to be checked in essay are -

    (a) Purposeful introduction ( should be interesting and tell what you are going to write in essay further)

    (b) Structured body, relevance to the topic, flow of language

    (c) Multidimensional thinking, involve all stakeholders, do PESTAL analysis, be critical - don't write too much on one single aspect, try to provide solutions to the problems enumerated

    (d) Conclusion should be positive and futuristic. Hope should always be there no matter how much bad the conditions are.

    Writing essay is an art that needs to be developed. With few established tricks and procedures, your every essay will fetch very good marks. So, work on those aspects. Feedback like these Tries to fool you by telling you that your handwriting is bad. So, you don't Tries to take their advice and have faith in yourself.

    @dog
    nice suggestions dude...thanks
    by the way what is PESTAL analysis?

    It's PESTLE.
    P - Political
    E - Economic
    S - Social
    T - Technological
    L - Legal
    E - Environmental
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  • paying 500 for one essay tells a lot about u .
    like what.....?
    ओ राही ...ओ राही ....तू रौशनी का सिपाही ...!!
    तू जो चलेगा....तो राह बनेगी...
    ख्वाबों से तेरे ...ये दुनिया सजेगी...
    ओ राही ...ओ राही....!
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  • i have written 2 mains earlier and got avg marks....i know the basics n all that....but still was not getting good marks....so i thought to get one evaluated at some so called good institute,while avoiding paying for whole test series....that was the rational for writing essay there.

    forumias offers a great platform.....but wanted to get some inputs and feedback from higher experienced faculties but expectations there turned all sour.

    will be uploading some essays here......hope will get valuable inputs.
    ओ राही ...ओ राही ....तू रौशनी का सिपाही ...!!
    तू जो चलेगा....तो राह बनेगी...
    ख्वाबों से तेरे ...ये दुनिया सजेगी...
    ओ राही ...ओ राही....!
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  • paying 500 for one essay tells a lot about u .
    yup, like you behaving like a perennial jerk
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  • paying 500 for one essay tells a lot about u .


    yup, like you behaving like a perennial jerk
    u must be one of those parasites....!

    ओ राही ...ओ राही ....तू रौशनी का सिपाही ...!!
    तू जो चलेगा....तो राह बनेगी...
    ख्वाबों से तेरे ...ये दुनिया सजेगी...
    ओ राही ...ओ राही....!
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  • paying 500 for one essay tells a lot about u .


    yup, like you behaving like a perennial jerk


    u must be one of those parasites....!

    wtf?? why are you dragging me in this? i came in your support.
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  • i didn't get you.....if it is so.....it's not intended to you.....peace.
    ओ राही ...ओ राही ....तू रौशनी का सिपाही ...!!
    तू जो चलेगा....तो राह बनेगी...
    ख्वाबों से तेरे ...ये दुनिया सजेगी...
    ओ राही ...ओ राही....!
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  • paying 500 for one essay tells a lot about u .


    yup, like you behaving like a perennial jerk


    u must be one of those parasites....!



    wtf?? why are you dragging me in this? i came in your support.
    =)) =))
    Maine saari duniya Ko sudhaarne ka theka le rakha hai, so don't mind if I mind your business instead of my own.
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  • paying 500 for one essay tells a lot about u .


    yup, like you behaving like a perennial jerk


    u must be one of those parasites....!



    wtf?? why are you dragging me in this? i came in your support.
    =)) =))
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  • edited October 2015
    paying 500 for one essay tells a lot about u .


    yup, like you behaving like a perennial jerk


    u must be one of those parasites....!



    wtf?? why are you dragging me in this? i came in your support.


    =)) =))
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  • paying 500 for one essay tells a lot about u .


    yup, like you behaving like a perennial jerk


    u must be one of those parasites....!



    wtf?? why are you dragging me in this? i came in your support.
    =)) =))
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